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1．（2021·北京·高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表达歉意并说明原因；

2.提出建议并给出理由。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.

How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.

In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。

1.词汇积累

通知：tell→inform

麻烦：problem→trouble

怎么样：what about→how about

适合：fit→suit

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I should be available anytime next weekend.

拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time.

2．（2021·全国卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：

1. 分析优势与不足；

2. 提出学习建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

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【答案】

Be smart online learners

Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.

 First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.

Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can\'t tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.

In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。

1. 词汇积累

充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of

扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich

各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of

不完美：imperfection→ defect

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.

3．（2022·全国卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：

1. 节目介绍；

2. 访谈的时间和话题。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Caroline,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Caroline,

This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

1.词汇积累

建立：establish→set up

了不起的：amazing→fabulous

帮助：aid→assistance

许多：plenty of→a lot of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.

拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.

4．（2021·天津）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：

(1) 表示感谢并问候；

(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；

(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。

注意：

(1) 词数不少于100；

(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

(3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Nancy,

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Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】

Dear Nancy,

I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.

Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I\'m going toTian \'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall.

In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.

Yours,

Li Jin

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。

1.词汇积累

照顾：take care of→look after

另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more

雇佣：employ→hire

既然：now that→since

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.

拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.

5．（2021·全国卷）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：

1. 展览时间、地点；

2. 观展感受；

3. 推荐观展。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

ln order to enrich students’ after-school life ,an exhibition of students\' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school litrary.Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.

Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。

1. 词汇积累

绘画：drawing→ painting

激发：spirit→spark

欣赏：appreciate→admire

欢迎：greet→welcome

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：

The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.

合并句：

The exhibition will last for two weeks,during which every student is welcome to visit.

6．（2022·全国卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：

1. 海洋的重要性；

2. 保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

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【答案】

When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8^th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.

Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.

All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.

【答案与解析】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。

1.词汇积累

越来越：more and more→increasingly

重视：place importance on→attach importance to

重要的：key→significant

此外：what’s more→furthermore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.

拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.

7．（2022·浙江）假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。

注意：

1 . 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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 【答案】

Dear Chris,

How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown. 

I hope we can keep in touch often.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。

1.词汇积累

返回：come back to → return to

思念：miss→ yearn

分享：share → exchange

玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun

开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content

过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.   

拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.

8．（2021·全国卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：

1．阐明写信事由；

2．征求建议；

3．表示感谢。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Chris，

How are you doing these days? I’m writing to ask you some advice.

In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on. I’m wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.

Thank you for your help. I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。

1. 词汇积累

建议：suggestion→ advice

提高：heighten→ promote

各种各样： all kinds of→ a variety of

选择：select→ choose

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on.

拓展句：We can choose a variety of themes, which include calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on.

9．（2021·全国卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。

Youth and Me

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【答案】

Youth and Me

It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.

I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.

【答案与解析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。

1.词汇积累

建立：found→establish

沮丧的：upset→depressed

得到：receive→obtain

赏析：enjoy→appreciate

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.

拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.

10．（2021·天津）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：

(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；

(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；

(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。

注意：(1)词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

A Beautiful Place in China

March 19, 2021

By Li Jin

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【答案】

A Beautiful Place in China

March 19, 2021

By Li Jin

Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.

Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. 

Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.

I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

【答案与解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。

第一步：审题

体裁：说明文

时态： 一般现在时

结构：总分法

第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。

要求：

1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点

①四川的地理位置：中国西南部

②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程

2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程

① 九寨沟是自然保护区

②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物

③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用

3.  你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by

第三步：连词成句

(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.

(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.

(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.

(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.

(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.

(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.

(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.

(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.

(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.

(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表递进关系：what is more

2.表转折关系：however

3.表示列举：such as, like

11．（2021·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 介绍活动安排；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Distinguished guests:

On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.

At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.

As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.

【答案与解析】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1．表示欢迎；

2．介绍活动安排；

3．表达祝愿。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate; teaching methods; canteen; extremely expect; unforgettable

第三步：连词成句

1. On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.

2. At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school.

3. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.

4. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods.

5. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.

6. As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming.

7. May you have an unforgettable experience.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：at first

2.表并列补充关系：Furthermore

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

2016--2020题

1.(2020年7月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。

注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Peter,

I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?

I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.

We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。

要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）

     2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）

     3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery

第三步：连词成句

1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.

2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.

3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.

4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：

I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。

Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。

As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。

2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。

全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

2.(2020年，天津卷，第二次高考）

假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:

(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；

(2)对活动的感受；

(3)对自己未来的展望。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；

(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:

成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony

新冠脑炎 COVID-F9

Dear Chris,

I’m so glad to hear from you.

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Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8^th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.

Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.

Best wishes！

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】

第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。

第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。

第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；

第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.

第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.

第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

3.(2020年，新高考全国I卷）

假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:

1. 参加人员:

2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:

3. 活动反响。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右:

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Cross-Country Running Race

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【答案】

A Cross-Country Running Race

Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。

【详解】

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主

结构:总分总

要求:

1. 参加人员

2. 跑步路线

3. 活动反响

第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.

第三步:连词成句

1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.

3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.

4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.

5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.

第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)

表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。

4.(2020年，全国卷I）

你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:

1. 人物简介；

2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

The person I respect

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.人物简介：

2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;

第三步：连词成句

1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.

2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因

2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。

5.(2020年，全国卷II）

上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:

1. 农场情况；

2. 采摘过程；

3. 个人感受

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 题目已为你写好。

题目:My Weekend

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【答案】

My Weekend

Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not only…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

6.(2020年，全国卷III）

假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:

1. 剧情简介；

2. 指导内容；

3. 商定时间地点。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 结束语已为你写好。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。

结构：总分总法

第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

write to；according to ；combine ；adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient

第三步：连词成句

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

7.假定你是高一学生李华。请你给你的美国网友Tony写一封e-mail，把你的暑假安排告诉他，并询问他的暑假安排。内容包括：

1. 完成作业，适量阅读；

2. 走亲访友；

3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。

注意：1. 词数80左右；信的开头已经写好。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tony,

How is everything with you recently?

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Tony,

How are things with you lately? I am glad to tell you the plan for my summer holiday, which is approaching. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community. Please send me an e-mail, sharing your plan for the summer vacation. OK?

Looking forward to it!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

 本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。

【详解】

 体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：分总 

要求：

1. 完成作业，适量阅读；

2. 走亲访友；

3. 参加社区组织的志愿者活动。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be glad to do sth./ tell sb. sth./ spend time in doing sth./ take part in/ intend to do sth./ send sth. to sb./ look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. How is everything going recently?

2. I am glad to tell you the plan for the approaching summer holiday.

3. Above all, I have got to finish all the assigned homework and do some reading as well.

4. I will also spend some time visiting relatives and close friends and even travelling near or far.

5. Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community.

6. What about your plan for the summer holiday?

7. Looking forward to it!

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

I have got to finish all the homework assigned by my teachers and do some reading as well.我必须完成老师布置的所有家庭作业，并且读一些书。句中使用了过去分词短语作后置定语。

[高分句型2]

Besides, I intend to take part in some meaningful volunteering activities organized by the community, which are of great benefit.句中which引导非线性定语从句，和be of + n. 表事物特征。

8.(2020年1月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:

1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。

注意:

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear George,

 I\'m writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.

The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.

Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I\'d appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.

                                              Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句；I\'d appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

9.(2018年3月，天津卷）

假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：

（1）鼓励他来中国留学；

（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；

（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。 

注意：

（1）词数不少于 100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

【答案】

Hi Chris，

I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education. I encourage you to come to China for further education for the following reasons.

First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. In addition to this, you can appreciate the fascinating scenery of China in your holidays, which will leave an unforgettable impression on you. Should you need any more help, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

I am looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.

                                                                        Yours

WangJin

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写给 Chris 留言。

【详解】

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：

（1）鼓励他来中国留学；

（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；

（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，鼓励他来中国留学。第二段，说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第三段，表达期望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: benefit, unforgettable impression, encourage sb to do sth,  appreciate the fascinating scenery of China, hesitate to do sth .

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First, In addition to, Finally.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

10.假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；

（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；

（3）希望从中有何收获。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100：

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

I’m Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your time.

Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】

Dear Chris，

I\'m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note,music is my priority.

I am interested in all kinds of music, among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz, and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.

Thank you for your time.

Yours，

Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李津的名义用英语给英方教师Chris写一封电子邮件。

【详解】

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作提要为假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

【点睛】

本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。定语从句的使用：I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz，and some famous jazz singers. 名词性从句的使用：I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.

11.(2019年，北京卷）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 交通出行；

2. 必备衣物。

注意：

1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.

I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.

Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.

Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。

【详解】

红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。

【点睛】

本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。

12.(2019年，全国卷I）

假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 个人优势；

3. 能做的事情。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结束语已为你写好。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.

I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。

【详解】

1.审题立意

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。

2.谋篇布局

书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。

3. 关键词和句子

根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。

【点睛】

本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

高级词汇：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；

高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。

13.(2019年6月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；

3. 临别祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Alex,

Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.

Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.

Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。

【详解】

1. 审题立意

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。

2.谋篇布局

书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。

3. 关键词和句子

根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。

【点睛】

本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次

14.(2019年，全国卷III）

假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：

1. 时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

【详解】

首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。

第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。

第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

【点睛】

本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。

15.(2019年，全国卷II）

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:

1. 比赛信息；

2. 赛前准备；

3. 表达期待。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4^th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.

You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!

Cheers,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。

【详解】

本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。

【点睛】

本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。

16.(2019年3月，天津卷）

假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：

（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；

（2）推荐的理由。 

参考词汇：

科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy

传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science

注意：

（1）词数不少于 100；

（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；

（3）内容充实、行文连贯；

（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。

March 22, 2019

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

By Li Jin

【答案】

March 22, 2019

Today I\'d like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books.

The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.

This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.

 I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you\'ll like it !Enjoy reading !

By Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英语征文；假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introduce a book to you（给你推荐一本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句Today I\'d like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books…in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials；不定式I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.；宾语从句I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.；强调句I do hope you\'ll like it!全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

17.(2018年11月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：

1. 行程信息；

2. 钱包特征；

3. 联系方式。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.

I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.

Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com

Thank you for your time and support.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇考查的写作类型是求助信

【详解】

第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and support.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

【高分句型1】

What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。

【高分句型2】

I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。

18.(2016年，全国卷III）

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2.说明原因；

3.另约时间。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。

亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。

19.(2018年6月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

（1） 口语能力：

（2） 相关经验；

（3） 应聘目的。

注意：

（1） 词数80左右；

（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.

Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。

第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of English，communicate with，get along with等。

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

20.(2018年，北京卷）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

(1) 表示欢迎；

(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；

(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：(1). 词数不少于50；

(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。

亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。

使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。

21.(2018年，全国卷III）

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 学校的体育场馆；

2. 主要的运动项目；

3. 你喜欢的项目。

注意：1. 词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。

首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。

22.(2018年，全国卷II）

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

(1)短片内容：学校的发展；

(2)放映时间、地点；

(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

(1)词数100左右；

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Boys and girls,

I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of school’s development, which is I think the attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn’t miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.

It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.

That’s all. Thank you.

The Students Union

June 8, 2018

【解析】

英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。

第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。

23.(2018年，天津卷）

假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。

（1）比赛的时间、地点；

（2）邀请他的原因；

（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。

注意：（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. There will be a month before the end of July, when the World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held in my city, Taiyuan.

With my great enthusiasm about robotics and my progress, I\'m made head of a team devoted to the competition.

When we\' re making preparations for the event, it occurred to me that you once took a prize in a similar competition. Therefore, it can\'t be better if you can join my team and show your talent. Meanwhile, attached to this email is a training plan I have worked out for my team, which I hope you\'ll read and make some suggestions. After all, you have lots of practical tricks which will be of great use to us.

I\'m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。

24.(2018年，全国卷I）

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：

（1）到达时间；

（2）合适的礼物；

（3）餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。

点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100单词左右，写出到达时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；

应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。

25.(2017年，全国卷II）

假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.展览时间、地点；

2.展览内容。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Henry，

I\'m very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week.As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I\'m sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China.During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture.

Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I\'d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.I\'m looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。

【详解】

首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。

其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】

本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句I\'m very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week.和宾语从句As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I\'m sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit.

26.

假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：

1、该人物是谁；

2、该人物的主要贡献；

3、该人物对你的影响。

注意：    1. 词数不少于100；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Lihua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.

As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world. So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.

Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。

题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。

亮点说明：范文使用了词组hear from, As for, In fact和搭配inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范文注意上下文的语意连贯。

考点：应用文写作

【名师点睛】

本题偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。

27.(2017年11月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：

1.时间

2.一同过节的家人

3.活动

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Mr. Hall,

I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.

Best wishes

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇书信类作文。围绕写信人找收信人有什么事或要求、传达什么讯息等内容展开的，所以在书信的开头考生要说清楚写信目的I’m writing to invite you to come …；其次考生要根据题目给出的内容提示扩充题干或提纲，本文想邀请外教Mr. Hall到你家过春节celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19 …需要扩展过春节可以做的事情；最后要表明自己期待对方同意等If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.。这样一篇结构完整的书信作文就轻松完成了。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。范文中使用了大量高中生熟悉的词汇traditionally， family reunion，have a big dinner，are able to， pick you up和句型，以提高文章的准确描述；恰当使用一些连词、插入语so 、also 、may even，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：90—110之间。

【范文亮点】①It’s traditionally a time for family reunion.②If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.运用了主将从现的句型。

28.(2017年，全国卷III）

假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：

球队活动；

报名方式及截止日期。

注意：

词数100左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Eric，

I was informed that our school Ping­pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping­pong.

As you know, playing ping­pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.

Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如： it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句使用了一些固定词组，如 show great fancy in;  sign up; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

29.(2017年，天津卷）

假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；

（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；

（3）希望她有机会重访天津。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：第十三届全运会  the 13th National Games

Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m glad to hear from you.

______________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】

Dear Mrs Green,__

I\'m so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I\'m very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.

I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.

I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.

Yours

Li Jin

【解析】

【分析】

本文为提纲类作文。

【详解】

这是李津给Mrs. Green的一封电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称，基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可。

首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含: (1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。

其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句；非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。

第三,要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。

最后，要注意一下卷面整洁， 书写工整。

【点睛】

本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑, 本文要点齐全，适当增加了细节，选择使用了高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量短语,为文章增色不少,如: make great progress取得很大的进步，build up增强。还使用了定语从句，如As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.，又如I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.和宾语从句、条件状语从句，如I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。

30.(2017年6月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 参加者；

2. 时间、地点；

3. 活动：登山、野餐等。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Chris,

How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.

Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don’t have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It’s just up to you.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。

【详解】

本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求，本文要涵盖以下三点内容，1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。

【点睛】

【高分句型1】

I’m very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。I’m very honored to...非常荣幸做某事

【高分句型2】

I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句，take…into consideration顾及；考虑到……

31.(2017年，全国卷I）

假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：

（1）时间和地点；

（2）内容：学习唐诗；

（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Leslie,

I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I\'ll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.

Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】

随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.定语从句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall.非谓语动词Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.

全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

32.(2010年，福建卷）

假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE“的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

注意：

根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；

开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

词数：120左右

参考词汇：短缺 shortage ; 资源 reaource

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning, I’m Li Hua from Fujian,China,It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.___________________________________________________________              

                                                                            

                                                                         

                                                     

That’s all. Thank you.

【答案】

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning. I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China. It’s my great honor to be here to say somethingabout the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.

As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it.

Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water opllution by law. Last but not least, it’s everyone’s responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.

In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.

That’s all. Thank you.

33.(2016年10月，浙江卷）

假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生（exchange student）去加拿大一所高中学习，住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍自己；

2.告知到达时间；

3.询问应做何准备。

注意:

1.词数80左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Lynn,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with your family in the next few months while I\'m studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.

Looking forward to seeing you!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；注意不要遗漏要点。同时要使用高级词汇和高级句子提升文章档次。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，语言简练，内容齐全，篇幅虽短但运用高级句子。I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.在句中an exchange student是同位语；I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with your family in the next few months while I\'m studying at the local high school.宾语从句和时间状语从句完美结合，同时句中使用了将来进行时态，恰到好处；I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.宾语从句和目的状语从句运用巧妙至极。

34.(2016年，全国卷I）

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：

 1. 词数100左右;

 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply.  And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。

本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮点所在。

35.(2016年6月，浙江卷）

“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。

要求如下：

1.简述你对这句名言的理解；

2.用一个具体事例加以说明；

3.给出恰当的结尾。

注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：

2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

________________________________

【答案】

Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【解析】

试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。考点：考查开放式作文

【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简洁，时态、人称准确，很好地

完成了写作任务。在文章开头，作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短语in detail, bear no fruit,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章表达的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do和how I achieved my success,以及句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等，这些都给文章增加了亮点。

36.(2016年，天津卷）

假设你是某高中的学生会主席李华。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿:

① 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；

② 谈谈收获或感想；

③ 表达祝愿与期望。

注意：① 词数不少于100；

② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

Dear friends，

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Thank you.

【答案】

Dear friends，

How time flies！Two weeks went by, and our exchange activities ended. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my feelings.

As scheduled, we participated in several instructive activities. We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was very delicious. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists’ works.

In my opinion, everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country. I hope we’ll get together again next year.

Thank you.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】

这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【点睛】

这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。范文流畅，使用了高级句型：定语从句As scheduled；状语从句的省略While visiting the art exhibition；短语on behalf of；participate in；get together也为文章添彩不少。

37.(2016年，全国卷II）

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1.主题：环境保护；

2.展览时间；

3.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

注意：

 1.词数100左右；

 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15^thand last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。

【详解】

文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。

【点睛】

本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested is welcome to participate；时间状语从句...the last time you visited our school；条件状语从句If you want to join...等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的英语写作能力。